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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Jasmin's Fashion Photoshoot on Guam


Haven't posted in awhile, been so busy! I did a Youtube video featuring Jasmin, she is a former pageant contestant here on Guam, needed her to model for me while I test the Pentax K-1 for portraits. Here are the top 3 pictures that I like from the set, they have been edited in PhotoShop to have a vintage look using Nik Collections. Below is a link to the video of me using the K-1 on her.





















Apr 05, 2017 at 10:26 PM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Jasmin's Fashion Photoshoot on Guam


Nice looking model in a great location. In case you didn't notice, it looks like you might have considerable dust on your sensor.


Apr 05, 2017 at 10:51 PM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Jasmin's Fashion Photoshoot on Guam


I think the dust is part of the retouching? If it is, i don't care for the look. Nice looking model, don't care for the way her mouth is, maybe it's a fashion thing? Kind of between a pouty look and a duck face selfie look? not trying to be mean or anything, just an observation/opinion.


Apr 05, 2017 at 10:58 PM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Jasmin's Fashion Photoshoot on Guam


As expected from Pentax... out of focus


Apr 06, 2017 at 04:36 AM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Jasmin's Fashion Photoshoot on Guam


BigIronCruiser wrote:
Nice looking model in a great location. In case you didn't notice, it looks like you might have considerable dust on your sensor.


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JohnBrose wrote:
I think the dust is part of the retouching? If it is, i don't care for the look. Nice looking model, don't care for the way her mouth is, maybe it's a fashion thing? Kind of between a pouty look and a duck face selfie look? not trying to be mean or anything, just an observation/opinion.


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Yes the dust is from the Analog Efex in Nik Collections, model wanted a vintage look with the dust and scratches. Yes I understand what you mean by the pouty and duck selfie look

InSanE wrote:
As expected from Pentax... out of focus


lol...



Apr 06, 2017 at 06:34 AM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Jasmin's Fashion Photoshoot on Guam


One word; nipples.


Apr 08, 2017 at 11:04 PM
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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · Jasmin's Fashion Photoshoot on Guam


I like #1 the best. Excellent full body shot with very nicely blurred background. Good separation. I like the contrast between her relatively light skin tones and the darker surroundings. I think you got the exposure spot on in the face but the left arm and right leg seem a touch bright.

Cropping to create closer looks can lead to issues like cropped hand and elbow in #2. I think #3 might look better cropped right below her hands as I don't care for the crop just below the knees. The off camera gaze can seem overdone when it is used in each pose. I think it works well in #1 and #3 and I like the angle of her pose in #3.



Apr 09, 2017 at 08:36 PM
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p.1 #8 · p.1 #8 · Jasmin's Fashion Photoshoot on Guam


griffithphoto wrote:
One word; nipples.


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I think those arnt her nipples, it looked like she was wearing pasties, something that covered them up, using no bra.

Brev00 wrote:
I like #1 the best. Excellent full body shot with very nicely blurred background. Good separation. I like the contrast between her relatively light skin tones and the darker surroundings. I think you got the exposure spot on in the face but the left arm and right leg seem a touch bright.

Cropping to create closer looks can lead to issues like cropped hand and elbow in #2. I think #3 might look better cropped right below her hands as I don't care for the crop just below the knees. The off camera gaze can seem overdone when it is
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Thank you Brev00, really appreciate the feedback



Apr 13, 2017 at 07:52 AM
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p.1 #9 · p.1 #9 · Jasmin's Fashion Photoshoot on Guam


Regardless of what they are it is super distracting.


Apr 13, 2017 at 02:04 PM
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p.1 #10 · p.1 #10 · Jasmin's Fashion Photoshoot on Guam


griffithphoto wrote:
One word; nipples.


I had to scroll back up and guess at what you were talking about; I hadn't even noticed.



Apr 13, 2017 at 03:08 PM





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