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p.2 #1 · p.2 #1 · Kids Soccer Game


Thanks again everyone.


Apr 02, 2017 at 06:29 AM
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Yes, much improved. First two have good action and fill the frame. Curious as to what your thinking was regarding the last two?

#3 has two particular things about it. First is the crop. All that negative space above weakens the scene. Secondly they are running out of the frame, i.e. better to have action with space for them to run into vs directly at the edge of the frame. The viewers mind will easily complete the scene when there is space in front of the action's direction.

#4 While symmetrically balanced it just isn't compelling. Action shown is late. Look to capture the striking of the ball and fill the frame with that player only. Goalie and net don't add to the scene, and if they don't add then they are detractors. JMTC

Matt



Apr 02, 2017 at 02:30 PM
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