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Hi Mathieu,
I'll leave some comments, but please let me know if you did not want critique and I will remove this.
For #1 the lines of the boardwalks is interesting, but I think the composition falters when the boardwalk dead ends in the middle of the photograph. Also, the shoreline at the top is distracting. I know it's there and you haven't shown enough of it to feel like it is part of the composition. I would crop it out.
For #2 the leading line is clean, but I could do without the person (people?) in the middle. It's difficult to tell from their position that they are people, so I would remove them. You've found a nice comp with the poking grass seed stalks. It appears from the processing that the levels were pushed quite hard. The lightness and color of the grasses looks odd and noisy. Also the blue sky looks like it has some artefacts.
Tim
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