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That is some car, Scott! Yours? Or is the owner the fellow with the tattoos and porkpie hat?
There are things that I like about this street photo: first of course that incredible car, the lady with the #tag shopping bag, the fellow on the left taking a photo of the car. The strange thing is that with this exotic and expensive a car, only a couple of people in that entire scene seem interested in it. Compositionally, I like how the umbrella focuses our attention on what's underneath it. I like the two people walking "in step" in front of the car. Your b&w pp seems perfect.
With all this said, I think what would improve this photo is the right "moment". The older gentleman in the front with the cap is partially blocking our view of the tattooed man who seems like an interesting character. My eye explores the photo, but I don't focus on anything in particular for long, and I somehow feel that your story is incomplete.
Steve
Edited on Mar 07, 2017 at 09:27 AM · View previous versions
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