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Your comments and critiques appreciated.

Steve



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Mar 05, 2017 at 01:47 PM
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Always wanted to date a girl like her, but there were none in my day.


Mar 05, 2017 at 06:53 PM
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Rick Joyce wrote:
Always wanted to date a girl like her, but there were none in my day.

😀😀😀
Looks can be deceiving. The nicest and sweetest girl you'd ever want to meet. With a fashion forward attitude and style.
Steve



Mar 05, 2017 at 07:30 PM
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eeneryma wrote:
😀😀😀
Looks can be deceiving. The nicest and sweetest girl you'd ever want to meet. With a fashion forward attitude and style.
Steve


I take your word for that




Mar 05, 2017 at 08:10 PM
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Pretty girl, love the hardware!

A few tweaks that came to mind.

Jeff







Mar 07, 2017 at 03:08 PM
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beavens wrote:
Pretty girl, love the hardware!

A few tweaks that came to mind.

Jeff


Well done Jeff. Agree with brightening of the face, especially around the eyes.

Steve



Mar 07, 2017 at 03:35 PM
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Hate to sound like a broken record. As usual, I'd ask where is the horizontal center line? Where are her eyes?


Mar 07, 2017 at 04:03 PM
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AuntiPode wrote:
Hate to sound like a broken record. As usual, I'd ask where is the horizontal center line? Where are her eyes?


oops. Your stern advice is much appreciated.

Will post something else tonight for your consideration.

Steve



Mar 07, 2017 at 04:09 PM
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Not trying to be stern, just helpful. For the past months most portraits here have fairly direct on isolated head shots, with static compos. Not sure why. Is it some sort of new contemporary meme? I'm afraid I don't keep up well with current trends. Maybe I'm just an old portrait curmudgeon.


Mar 07, 2017 at 09:15 PM
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AuntiPode wrote:
Not trying to be stern, just helpful. For the past months most portraits here have fairly direct on isolated head shots, with static compos. Not sure why. Is it some sort of new contemporary meme? I'm afraid I don't keep up well with current trends. Maybe I'm just an old portrait curmudgeon.


Stern, just my facetious nature. Helpful, always.

Here's another take, with your compositional assistance in mind. PP not totally complete yet, but you get the idea.

Steve




Nautica 78




Mar 07, 2017 at 09:41 PM
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eeneryma wrote:
Stern, just my facetious nature. Helpful, always.

Here's another take, with your compositional assistance in mind. PP not totally complete yet, but you get the idea.

Steve


An engaging young woman. Took a quick stab at the raccoon eyes, and a crop.







Mar 07, 2017 at 10:12 PM
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RustyBug wrote:
An engaging young woman. Took a quick stab at the raccoon eyes, and a crop.


My thought exacrtly.
Steve



Mar 07, 2017 at 10:14 PM
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Without that smile ... your first shots do her no justice.

Imo, portraiture is all about getting those facial muscles to work their magic once you get beyond the "facial tension" stage. I can be a wiz with a camera, but if I can't get beyond facial tension with my subjects ... well, there's a reason I don't do portraits. Even if you don't get such a bright face full of teeth, facial tension just steals from what a person has to offer.



Mar 07, 2017 at 10:20 PM
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Love the smiling version so much more!!

Jeff



Mar 10, 2017 at 10:19 AM
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+1 @ the smile! Wow what a difference!
Now I just gotta say it. She's HOT! OR should I just keep it toned down to "engaging".

Very nice capture Steve. I do like Kent's adjustments as well.

Dave



Mar 10, 2017 at 10:27 AM
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lighthound wrote:
+1 @ the smile! Wow what a difference!
Now I just gotta say it. She's HOT! OR should I just keep it toned down to "engaging".

Very nice capture Steve. I do like Kent's adjustments as well.

Dave


Thanks Jeff and Dave! She's a sweetheart, and her engaging personality and warmth shows through much stronger in the second photo.



Mar 10, 2017 at 10:53 AM
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Now that's capturing personality!

Many possible minor crop variations.







Mar 11, 2017 at 04:37 PM
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AuntiPode wrote:
Now that's capturing personality!

Many possible minor crop variations.


Thanks Karen!

Steve



Mar 11, 2017 at 11:04 PM





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