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Your comments and critiques welcome.

Steve




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Mar 04, 2017 at 11:05 PM
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Wondering how your mono vision might look? The blue and yellow are dominating for me, and she looks slightly blurred - subject movement?

Bob



Mar 05, 2017 at 11:52 AM
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Bob Jarman wrote:
Wondering how your mono vision might look? The blue and yellow are dominating for me, and she looks slightly blurred - subject movement?

Bob


Appreciate your eye Bob. Wished for more sharpness, but she is a little blurred. ISO was 800, but it was dusk and she was walking, but slowly. As for the colors, there was no extra saturation in post. Colors to taste, but I wanted to emphasize the "happy" and "party" aspect of the colors, as opposed to her drab dress, walker, and perhaps not so happy state.

Steve



Mar 05, 2017 at 12:06 PM
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I like the triangle that the woman and walker form, but the "New York Lottery" is overpowering.

Might be stronger with Bob's suggestion.

Jeff



Mar 07, 2017 at 03:21 PM





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