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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Crossing Park Avenue


Your comments and critiques welcome.

Steve




Crossing Park Avenue




Feb 17, 2017 at 08:47 PM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Crossing Park Avenue


There are two elements that make this an image with impact:
1. The vertical line virtually bisecting her head
2. The in the air stride of another pedestrian about to enter the scene
without these, not sure what we have here. Not sure it pulls together as a message but it does give me pause to reflect, look again (and again)

nit: she is not in focus

Scott



Feb 18, 2017 at 09:14 AM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Crossing Park Avenue


This does have a dynamic. The strides of both seem identical. The side look the line. Does the second walker turn at the line and follow the first? Is there a third and fourth? All imaginary scenarios that spring to mind.

Agree, OOF but not a big deal.



Feb 18, 2017 at 09:55 AM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Crossing Park Avenue


ben egbert wrote:
This does have a dynamic. The strides of both seem identical. The side look the line. Does the second walker turn at the line and follow the first? Is there a third and fourth? All imaginary scenarios that spring to mind.

Agree, OOF but not a big deal.


Scott and Ben:

Most appreciate your thoughts. This was taken through a dirty bus window, so the best I could do with pp. I wish the NYC MTA would clean their windows more often.

Steve



Feb 18, 2017 at 10:32 AM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Crossing Park Avenue


Dirty window makes more sense than OOF or motion blur.


Feb 18, 2017 at 10:38 AM





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