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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Takeoff


C&C always welcomed.

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Feb 15, 2017 at 08:34 PM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Takeoff


Nice action shot, I hope he missed those trees

I would prefer a much tighter shot most of the left side and some of the bottom is not adding much and the tree distortion is detracting.



Feb 16, 2017 at 02:56 PM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Takeoff


+1 @ Ben. For me the appeal of these kinds of images is the sort of out in the middle of nowhere look, like no one has been there before. To that end I wonder if you could crop out some of the snowmobile ? trail on the rhs.

Just my two cents.
keith



Feb 16, 2017 at 03:12 PM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Takeoff


A tremendous action capture with trees sharply defined and snow correctly rendered


Feb 16, 2017 at 05:47 PM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Takeoff


A very fine action capture that shows a very good control of the light. Colors are clean and crisp.
To my eyes a vert crop would fit better the action, giving more emphasis to the jumper, a better sense of height adding at the same time some tension. Clearly a personal view that gives a bit different message and it is your image so in the end it all comes down to what message you want to send.
Socrate







Feb 16, 2017 at 07:58 PM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Takeoff


This was shot with the Rokinon 14mm, which I'm finding is quite difficult for composing shots, especially skiing in the backcountry. I agree, should probably have been closer to the action. As for the snowmobile tracks, that's actually debris from a slough or "mini" avalanche.

Thanks for the comments!

[url=https://flic.kr/p/QX5Amr]



Feb 16, 2017 at 08:03 PM
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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · Takeoff


Shasoc wrote:
A very fine action capture that shows a very good control of the light. Colors are clean and crisp.
To my eyes a vert crop would fit better the action, giving more emphasis to the jumper, a better sense of height adding at the same time some tension. Clearly a personal view that gives a bit different message and it is your image so in the end it all comes down to what message you want to send.
Socrate


I must have responded right after your comment because I didn't see your edit, definitely like the more vertical crop. Thanks for the comments Socrate.

Cole



Feb 16, 2017 at 08:43 PM
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p.1 #8 · p.1 #8 · Takeoff


Very nice. Perhaps use burst-mode and get a shot with the skier just a tad more "in the air"?


Feb 16, 2017 at 09:08 PM





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