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RustyBug wrote:
Took a stab at some things. There are some challenges with the inherent tonal values in the clouds, and part of the fence, but some additional food for thought primer, nonetheless.
In my mind, the lighting suggests more of a "break of day" vibe than midday hues. Could use more refinement ... but hopefully, you get the gist.
At the end of the day, however ... I think there is too much competition for the gate, lending some consideration for a possible artistic, lemonade rendering, approach to help quell the competition.
If our message is "gate" (vs. break of day, etc.) ... I think we have to find a way(s) to correlate the draw to the message. Sometimes it can be an additive approach to enhance the message, other times a subtractive means (or combinations) to reduce the detractors @ more than one way to skin the cat.
As always, I think those determinations rely heavily on knowing the goals of your image @ your message, your pic, your call.
Thanks, Kent, for your help with the reworks. I prefer your second from a couple of days ago for its open, airy feeling.
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