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My first rugby match of new season - opted out when rain grew heavier, shortly thereafter thunder and lightening cleared the pitch. Imagine they concluded later... Any thoughts? Not really excited about crop (lack of) on #3 but I want to think something is there..

Bob




Smith Brothers? :)














Jan 22, 2017 at 01:02 PM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Faces from Saturday


All nice shots, Bob - don't have much to hit you on. Maybe clone out the blob lower-right in #1?

Jeff



Jan 22, 2017 at 01:18 PM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Faces from Saturday


It has been said that rugby is a gentleman's game played by hoodlums. The second photo might bear that out


Jan 22, 2017 at 02:26 PM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Faces from Saturday


Good group. Like the first, the second is great action, but the last, is that Liam Neeson?


Jan 22, 2017 at 04:36 PM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Faces from Saturday


Thanks guys,

Appreciate your comment and feedback.


Ben - yes, the resemblance struck me also.

BOb



Jan 23, 2017 at 07:44 AM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Faces from Saturday


1- I like your processing and tones in this one. I don't know how or why but you can almost feel those beards.

2- My favorite out of this set because of the dynamics of rain and facial expressions. The torn shirt and tension of the hands adds even more.

3- Nice shot and shows the weather nicely. The hood in front of him distracts though. Had you considered possibly going with a square crop?

Dave



Jan 23, 2017 at 03:41 PM
Bob Jarman
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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · Faces from Saturday


lighthound wrote:
1- I like your processing and tones in this one. I don't know how or why but you can almost feel those beards.

2- My favorite out of this set because of the dynamics of rain and facial expressions. The torn shirt and tension of the hands adds even more.

3- Nice shot and shows the weather nicely. The hood in front of him distracts though. Had you considered possibly going with a square crop?

Dave


Thanks Dave,

Re square crop - considered but then he's looking into the edge of the frame - prefer to have a space into which he's looking.

Bob



Jan 23, 2017 at 04:07 PM
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p.1 #8 · p.1 #8 · Faces from Saturday


Bob Jarman wrote:
Thanks Dave,

Re square crop - considered but then he's looking into the edge of the frame - prefer to have a space into which he's looking.

Bob


I just tried a 4:3 with a smidgen of clone work. Not sure if it get's it any closer to what you wanted though. Might be a little too tight all around now.
IDK, just playin and spit balling.







Jan 23, 2017 at 04:24 PM
Bob Jarman
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p.1 #9 · p.1 #9 · Faces from Saturday


lighthound wrote:
I just tried a 4:3 with a smidgen of clone work. Not sure if it get's it any closer to what you wanted though. Might be a little too tight all around now.
IDK, just playin and spit balling.


That works,

thanks,

Bob




Jan 23, 2017 at 05:00 PM
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p.1 #10 · p.1 #10 · Faces from Saturday


Good series, Bob.
First has your classic, refined, Jarman look, including great toning. Always works for me. Their alignment, down to the eyes and beards, makes it really work well.
Second: not really ready to see color from you, but it works. The grab of the expressions makes it.
Third: Liam needed to be starring alone in the frame. I like the rework.

Scott



Jan 23, 2017 at 09:04 PM
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p.1 #11 · p.1 #11 · Faces from Saturday


Thanks Scott,

Bob



Jan 24, 2017 at 10:15 AM





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