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Jan 10, 2017 at 07:12 PM
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Almost IR in nature - I really like it.

Any recoverable detail in some of those highlights?

Jeff



Jan 10, 2017 at 08:27 PM
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Here is another version







Jan 10, 2017 at 09:26 PM
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Liked the first image but I like your second version even more. Snow and grass feel more natural.

The distant structures add a nice pull into the scene and yet does not over power.

Dave



Jan 10, 2017 at 11:58 PM
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Thanks, Jeff, for the suggestion for change and thanks, Dave, for the critique.


Jan 11, 2017 at 12:20 AM
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I like both versions, each having a very different feeling. The first looks like a Winter whiteout. The second,with much more detail to focus on.

Steve



Jan 11, 2017 at 02:09 PM
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The second is my choice here.


Jan 11, 2017 at 03:03 PM
 

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Thanks Steve and Ben.


Jan 11, 2017 at 03:12 PM
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Nice job on the 1st pic, Rick. *Really* nice.

In fact, I prefer the 1st.

Not always do we need more detail and drama.

In fact, I might suggest cloning out the fencing bits on the left.

I'm curious, is the 1st representative of what you saw? If so, I would like to somehow be transported and just "be there" for a while. Very serene.



Jan 12, 2017 at 10:52 AM
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Familiarity wrote:
Nice job on the 1st pic, Rick. *Really* nice.

In fact, I prefer the 1st.

Not always do we need more detail and drama.

In fact, I might suggest cloning out the fencing bits on the left.

I'm curious, is the 1st representative of what you saw? If so, I would like to somehow be transported and just "be there" for a while. Very serene.


Thanks very much. The scene is just as I saw it. It was serene with only the occasional coyote roaming and hawk soaring.



Jan 12, 2017 at 11:12 AM
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The landscape is serene and this vision of it, the first version, is sublime. The subtle and delicate tonalities are not vague or indistinct because they are balanced so well. The eye is calmed and soothed and gently guided by the fence line into the misty distance. ( The second version seems rude in comparison.)


Jan 13, 2017 at 01:01 PM
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pjbishop wrote:
The landscape is serene and this vision of it, the first version, is sublime. The subtle and delicate tonalities are not vague or indistinct because they are balanced so well. The eye is calmed and soothed and gently guided by the fence line into the misty distance. ( The second version seems rude in comparison.)


+1 @ the second seeming a bit harsh/jarring in comparison with the dreamy look of the first.

1 all the way!

Jeff



Jan 13, 2017 at 01:27 PM
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Thanks PJ and Jeff for your comments and defined critiques.


Jan 13, 2017 at 07:02 PM







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