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Nice images, but there's room for improvement.
Image 1. Your background is very cluttered. Your model looks very rigid and uncomfortable. Move the model more forward of the background and use a larger aperture for your image. Tell the model a joke or two to get her to lighten up. I would crop some of the sides of this image.
Image 2. Your white balance is off, and your model has bluish/green skin tones. Your composition is questionable. The tree appears to be the subject in the image not the model. This location may have worked with a vertical composition, and the white balance tweaked a bit.
Image 3 is not too bad. I would have put the model just a bit more to the right. I would clone out the blue blob in the middle.
Image 4 is not too bad. It is tricky to pull off a nice shot with OOF elements in the foreground. In this case IMHO it doesn't work. Others may disagree.
I like image 5 the best because you're using a larger aperture, and the cluttered background is out of focus and not as distracting. However, there are white balance issues in this image also.
Image 6 isn't too bad. Again I think a larger aperture would have been better. I think a portrait composition would have been better.
Did you shoot any portrait compositions at all?
Nice set.
Good luck.
Thanks for sharing your images.
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