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Archive 2016 · The Bund

  
 
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Dec 16, 2016 at 10:49 PM
Andre Labonte
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · The Bund


Try leaving less dead space above her head. It would bring better balance to your photos.


Dec 16, 2016 at 11:06 PM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · The Bund


3 & 8 are my favorites. Nice compositions.

Watch your focus. A lot of these are off. 2 is focused on door behind her. Others are front focused probably because the camera is locking onto her high contrast clothes. 8 the focus is at her elbow instead of back on her face.



Dec 17, 2016 at 07:12 AM
Jim Rickards
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · The Bund


Agree with Andre.

The hemline of the dress is very attractive, yet you compose to avoid it in #1 & #3, leaving tons of room over her head.
OTOH, #9 & #10 have lots of space over her head but need it to show the skyline well.

#2 might be your best shot here, if you crop away some dead space above her.



Dec 17, 2016 at 07:19 AM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · The Bund


Nice set. 4,5,6 and 8 are very interesting.


Dec 17, 2016 at 07:29 AM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · The Bund


Two, three, five, and eight work best for my eye. Though as a detail to look after, the rotation of her watch on her arm is a bit distracting. Nice set!
Douglas



Dec 17, 2016 at 10:11 AM
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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · The Bund


Agree about the over head space. More noticeable in some than others. It's too bad she doesn't actually smile in any of them. Very nice exposures and pretty girls are my all time favorite subject.


Dec 17, 2016 at 05:56 PM
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p.1 #8 · p.1 #8 · The Bund


Beautiful set, I especially like the one at the piano.
Nancy



Dec 18, 2016 at 01:41 PM





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