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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · The boat


Hello, any suggestion and critique will be thank!
Greetings!







Nov 24, 2016 at 11:09 AM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · The boat


Love the blue water. My first thought is maybe a little crop on the bottom.


Nov 24, 2016 at 12:04 PM
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I agree with Steve. The bright foliage at the bottom is a distraction. Crop above and preserve the daker green vegetation.
The boaters are a secondary subject, gaining attention in part by their centering and the bright red. But they are small, if that is your message. Rather I see this as a broader landscape with color and scale highlighted by the boat and its passengers. Was there a landscape format version to be had?

Scott



Nov 24, 2016 at 07:51 PM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · The boat


steve_a_reno wrote:
Love the blue water. My first thought is maybe a little crop on the bottom.


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sbeme wrote:
I agree with Steve. The bright foliage at the bottom is a distraction. Crop above and preserve the daker green vegetation.
The boaters are a secondary subject, gaining attention in part by their centering and the bright red. But they are small, if that is your message. Rather I see this as a broader landscape with color and scale highlighted by the boat and its passengers. Was there a landscape format version to be had?

Scott


Thank for sharing your observations. In that place, I didn't have the possibility for a landscape framing.



Nov 25, 2016 at 11:06 AM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · The boat


Got enough pixels for a tighter crop?

Cheers,

Jeff







Nov 29, 2016 at 10:13 AM
sebasan
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · The boat


beavens wrote:
Got enough pixels for a tighter crop?

Cheers,

Jeff


It's a 18 mpx raw file, some crop is possible.
Thanks



Nov 29, 2016 at 11:02 AM
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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · The boat


The colour of the lake water - at least on my monitor - seems to have an overly bright, cyan tinge


Nov 29, 2016 at 12:32 PM





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