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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Sugar House (BW)


colors are a bit blah this year; extreme drought in the Northeast


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  Canon EOS 5D Mark II    EF17-40mm f/4L USM lens    20mm    f/8.0    1/90s    200 ISO    0.0 EV  




Oct 31, 2016 at 08:12 PM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Sugar House (BW)


B&W work fine for the structure and wood pile, not so much for the trees. I think a tight crop might be better.


Oct 31, 2016 at 09:36 PM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Sugar House (BW)


Ben took the words right out of my mouth. I was thinking the exact same thing with this one.

Excellent shot and conversion but in mono with all the trees and branches it feels like information over load viewing it. Tighter would definitely improve IMHO.

>Dave walking away mumbling...<
" I can't believe he converted a beautiful fall color scene like this into a B&W. People have been arrested for less!"



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Oct 31, 2016 at 10:32 PM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Sugar House (BW)


Ben and Dave,
thanks for the feedback
helpful that it is in unison

here is a tighter crop, a tad of vignette
better?


Scott




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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Sugar House (BW)


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Nov 01, 2016 at 02:02 AM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Sugar House (BW)


Looks better. I was thinking maybe an even tighter crop off the top but I'm not sure after doing an edit on it.


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Nov 01, 2016 at 02:49 PM
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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · Sugar House (BW)


Tighter crop is better imo - the scene was super busy.

Still unsure about the shot overall as it's still got a lot going on in terms of the leaves/small branches and I don't know if this excels in mono.

You won't hear me asking for this much, but can we see the color shot?

Cheers!

Jeff



Nov 03, 2016 at 06:03 PM







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