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Oct 27, 2016 at 01:17 AM
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Scott,

I think the earlier images are stronger.

Suggestion: remove the rightmost partial pieces to add tension; see how clipping the building might add to the form. Just a couple of thoughts,

Bob



Oct 27, 2016 at 12:04 PM
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sbeme wrote:
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Beautiful geometry Scott. I love this series. I particularly like the way you've abstracted the forms and shapes with this particular black and white processing.

Steve



Oct 27, 2016 at 01:06 PM
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may not be as far as you suggested Bob, but here is a variation


Scott



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Oct 27, 2016 at 01:41 PM
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eeneryma wrote:
Beautiful geometry Scott. I love this series. I particularly like the way you've abstracted the forms and shapes with this particular black and white processing.

Steve


Thanks Steve!
Scott



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further crop

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Oct 27, 2016 at 06:55 PM
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Hey Scott, these are a lot of fun to play around with. I really like construction site 2A the best, but I do see a part of this I really like. Do you mind if I post it?


Oct 27, 2016 at 08:57 PM
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Probably my favorite too, Dale.
Please, go ahead, but post to Critique and not simultaneously to BW.

Scott



Oct 27, 2016 at 09:05 PM
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I like the tightest crop. I'd like to see it without the building there, to see how that works. I guess the more abstracted, the longer the moment of recognition - the better according to my taste. Very nice.


Oct 27, 2016 at 11:42 PM
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thx Pavel
then take a look at Dale's rework on Critique. I think it may be the best version

Scott



Oct 28, 2016 at 12:09 AM







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