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Both sets are great. My main suggestion would be to raise your camera a little. Also, in #2 I would turn the gentleman so that he is turned more towards his daughter and wife rather than away from them.
I really, really like the B&W set. You can really see the connection between them. I would suggest that they would be even better if the two were touching in 8 and 11. For instance, if her hand was on his knee and his hand was on top of hers it would show a more intimate connection between the two. The others where they are obviously engaged in conversation are perfect like they are. They make me want to hear what they are talking about. Terrific job!
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