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rpkwon
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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Family Portriat


Looking for C&C...All welcomed.

There's just something off about that I just can't put a finger on. I've stared at this long enough that I've gone picture blind.

Thanks!




Edited on Oct 17, 2016 at 07:07 PM · View previous versions



Oct 17, 2016 at 06:05 PM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Family Portriat


Now that is one big happy and beautiful looking family!

First thing that struck me was "flat". I think you are leaving a lot of goodness on the table with this one and you have a keep for sure. Just needs a little tweaking I think. I'd check you black and white points and see if that makes thing pop a little more.

Other than that, I'll leave everything else you the others here as they are far more experienced with shots like this and they can guide you better.

Dave



Oct 17, 2016 at 06:55 PM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Family Portriat


Thanks Dave


Oct 17, 2016 at 06:57 PM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Family Portriat


Just realized the file size is big. Trying to resize


Oct 17, 2016 at 07:08 PM







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