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Oct 16, 2016 at 11:28 AM
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This makes a very nice geometric pattern with good symmetry. B&W is a natural choice as well. I wonder how it would look with a bit off the bottom to eliminate those front shadows which are the primary non symmetrical elements?


Oct 16, 2016 at 11:32 AM
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Now that's what I call line-ing up a shot.

+1/2 @ Ben for the front shadows.

Since they do repeat throughout the scene, I leave them in. BUT, I might crop the bottom so it starts right in the middle (light) of the two bottom shadows (left side) ... or slightly under them. That then lets the shadows provide some stop / framing to push us into the scene (rather than the bottom edge @ bright to pull us down). Worth a look at least.

Then, it might warrant a tweak on the top to balance. Again, worth the effort to explore.

Nit ... a bit or curvature in your horizontal lines, or is that an illusion



Oct 16, 2016 at 11:58 AM
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Beautiful geometry, like an Escher painting. Agree with Kent about cropping bottom to beginning of shadow. Nice work!
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Oct 16, 2016 at 06:33 PM
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Beautiful geometry, like an Escher painting. Agree with Kent about cropping bottom to beginning of shadow. Nice work!
Steve

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Oct 16, 2016 at 06:33 PM
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A good use of geometry and perspective. Eliminating all detail in the sky, especially in the top of the image, would enhance the abstraction.

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Oct 17, 2016 at 09:47 AM
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interesting. if you did crop the bottom, then the images appears to be full of reflections, giving it an entirely different visual appearance. better?
regards, tom



Oct 17, 2016 at 04:17 PM
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Nice abstract Scott. I kind of like the shadows at the bottom, and how they repeat into the image. I might even try darkening the shadows............ or not.


Oct 17, 2016 at 06:44 PM
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Once you get the crop worked out for the "mirror" effect ... metal.


Oct 17, 2016 at 09:34 PM
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What a neat pattern you captured here Scott!
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Oct 18, 2016 at 11:13 AM
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Freakin cool image!!!!!!!!!!!


Oct 19, 2016 at 08:06 PM
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Nicely done Scott.



Oct 20, 2016 at 04:14 AM
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Very nicely done. The graphic nature is most impressive.


Oct 22, 2016 at 10:07 AM
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re-work, more graphic

Scott



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Nov 05, 2016 at 09:35 AM
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This does accentuate the symmetry, but at some cost. The left structural element forming a vee is lost in the white area and has a bent appearance. I went back to the original and see it was always there, but not noticed until I saw this version. Some of the lighter colored (reflective) structures beldn into teh background white.


Nov 05, 2016 at 10:51 AM
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Thanks Ben,
your observations are careful and well-taken

Scott



Nov 07, 2016 at 08:04 PM
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Keep those shadows and crop (at least the top/bottom)! I am curious about how it would look coming in from the right/left and REALLY making this go vertical.

I love OP and removing the shadows/tightening the crop reduces the impact of this shot IMO.

I am a big fan here, Scott.

Jeff



Nov 09, 2016 at 01:36 PM
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beavens wrote:
Keep those shadows and crop (at least the top/bottom)! I am curious about how it would look coming in from the right/left and REALLY making this go vertical.

I love OP and removing the shadows/tightening the crop reduces the impact of this shot IMO.

I am a big fan here, Scott.

Jeff


thanks Jeff



Nov 16, 2016 at 09:29 AM
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I like the original, just like you saw it. Well done.


Nov 16, 2016 at 09:55 PM
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Really nice! Being OCD I love geometric and symmetric photos. I was gonna suggest going in the opposite direction of your "more graphic" rework: I think the sky and ground plane are a little *too* overexposed and I would've brought it down just a little. This is still plenty graphic.


Nov 17, 2016 at 01:56 PM
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