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Sittin' by the dock







Oct 09, 2016 at 03:29 AM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Dockside ...


Richly coloured with serene water reflections the image speaks eloquence


Oct 09, 2016 at 10:14 AM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Dockside ...


I guess you are going for a moody feeling, but to me the image just seems underexposed.







Oct 09, 2016 at 12:02 PM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Dockside ...


Thanks Jim,

+1 @ vibe vs. underexposure (sooc has more exposure).



Oct 09, 2016 at 12:48 PM
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I get the mood and prefer the darker rendition. It works well for web, would need good lighting for a print to work.

The darker version accentuates the red leaves and tree trunks while subduing the rest and that is what makes it work.



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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Dockside ...


Definitely like the darker mood OP image. I think what might be throwing the viewers eyes is the super bright wooden dock relative to the rest of the scene. Maybe burn that down just a pinch?

I'm really liking the colors and tones you are using.

You are on a roll here Kent! Good to see you posting! Keep em coming!

Dave



Oct 10, 2016 at 01:01 AM
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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · Dockside ...


Beautifully done, Kent. The darker version has the quiet mood and much greater emotive power for me.
Scott



Oct 10, 2016 at 03:45 PM
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p.1 #8 · p.1 #8 · Dockside ...


Yup, it is a very moody shot with a nice serene feel. Two things I would do to improve it, actually three.
I would tone down the dock (too bright if compared to the overall lighting.
I would open up a bit the cabin with the lights on. I would warm up the overall tones to give a sense of late afternoon. Something like this.
Socrate







Oct 10, 2016 at 07:06 PM
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p.1 #9 · p.1 #9 · Dockside ...


This rework is really a nice addition to an already compelling image.


Oct 10, 2016 at 08:08 PM
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p.1 #10 · p.1 #10 · Dockside ...


ben egbert wrote:
This rework is really a nice addition to an already compelling image.


Agreed.




Oct 10, 2016 at 09:52 PM







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