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I took this in London in June from a bus....Cant as yet go back and reshot it but have the sooc image and 2 versions.I like the cartoon like effect, but am looking to all of you on your opinions about the crop and post work and also your ideas and suggestions...Straightened in Elements and reworked in OnOne ...I haven't as yet gone to B&W. I'm not sure yet if the post works where it is or at all....

















Oct 08, 2016 at 05:00 AM
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I prefer the last crop and the second colors. The shapes and yellow on blue make this, no way to get that in B&W.


Oct 08, 2016 at 02:51 PM
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I would crop out the left side of the frame, clone the light pole out and make the shot simply about colors and lines.
Socrate







Oct 08, 2016 at 03:13 PM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Looking for your ideas on this.


Thank-you for your thoughts......I'm thinking by Socrates idea is where my mind's eye saw it..I found the light pole interesting and thought it- Had- to be included.. Apparently it doesn't......

Thank-you again



Oct 08, 2016 at 04:10 PM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Looking for your ideas on this.


Great architectural image.
I agree that color is the way to go. It's not that you can't make a good BW here. I am sure you can. It's that the color adds extra life, pop and interest.
Hard pressed to choose between the second and third. I am sometimes a bit of a purist, so I lean towards keeping the lamppost in, in which case the second image is stronger. And I agree with eliminating the side structures as Socrate has illustrated.

Scott



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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Looking for your ideas on this.


Great job by Socrate finessing the essence of the photo, the unusual design and colors and repeating patterns.

Steve



Oct 09, 2016 at 03:11 AM
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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · Looking for your ideas on this.


Socrate did a good job with the re-composition. I think a bit more pop and that's all


Oct 23, 2016 at 02:57 AM
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Hi Wiz, as you said, this has a lot of potential in BW too. With the yellow, you can really play around with color filters to adjust the tones. You have some beautiful lines in this, and I absolutely love those lamp posts, a really nice shot. The cloud reflection is very cool too. Here are my thoughts:










Oct 23, 2016 at 03:30 PM
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Proof it works in BW too!
Great subject



Oct 23, 2016 at 03:38 PM







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