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Your comments and critiques always welcome.

Steve



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Oct 05, 2016 at 02:32 AM
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Another good catch Steve! I like the abstract effect of this and wonder if maybe a tighter crop of just the entire door panel might make this stronger. I think with the hinge hardware and handle it would be enough for people to figure it out but would keep them guessing for a few more second trying to figure it out.

Really like that top left window reflection. Nice!

Dave



Oct 05, 2016 at 02:15 PM
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lighthound wrote:
Another good catch Steve! I like the abstract effect of this and wonder if maybe a tighter crop of just the entire door panel might make this stronger. I think with the hinge hardware and handle it would be enough for people to figure it out but would keep them guessing for a few more second trying to figure it out.

Really like that top left window reflection. Nice!

Dave


Thanks Dave. Re: your suggestion, for a start I think I'll crop off the very bottom with that alternating red sign that pulls your eye away.

Steve



Oct 05, 2016 at 02:49 PM
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It took me a few seconds to figure out that this was the back of a truck, a tighter crop would perhaps add a few more. I agree that cropping off the bottom would be good.

Another nice catch. Guess the selfie was unavodiable



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The technical suggestions are all, off course, worthwhile but the real magic here lies in the multiplicity of kaleidoscopic visual images all caught with you on the panel of a truck.


Oct 05, 2016 at 03:46 PM
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Ben and Rick:

Much appreciate your suggestions and comments.

Steve



Oct 05, 2016 at 05:37 PM
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Rick Joyce wrote:
The technical suggestions are all, off course, worthwhile but the real magic here lies in the multiplicity of kaleidoscopic visual images all caught with you on the panel of a truck.


This is pretty much what I was thinking, but just couldn't find the words to say it as eloquently as Rick did.



Oct 05, 2016 at 05:46 PM
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Fred Amico wrote:
This is pretty much what I was thinking, but just couldn't find the words to say it as eloquently as Rick did.


Thanks Fred.



Oct 05, 2016 at 05:59 PM







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