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Matt Hoffart
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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Window Light Tween


Comments and critique always welcome.

Canon 5D III
Sigma Art 30mm 1.4
Silver Reflector

F1.4
1/400
ISO 100

Edited on Sep 29, 2016 at 11:48 AM · View previous versions



Sep 28, 2016 at 04:23 PM
glowhunter
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Window Light Tween


I think this shot would look better in color.


Sep 28, 2016 at 04:31 PM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Window Light Tween


30mm is not the most flattering focal length for portraits. I also think your reflector is a little hot. Did you use the silver side?


Sep 28, 2016 at 04:56 PM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Window Light Tween


Agree that colour might be best (gotta see it, though).

For me, the blurred lips and teeth were disappointing. So I'm thinking I'd like more DOF, which would also help the hair make the frame around her face more prominent.



Sep 28, 2016 at 08:02 PM





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