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Archive 2016 · Critique: Off Camera Flash/aerial silks

  
 
Johnny B Goode
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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Critique: Off Camera Flash/aerial silks


My favorite from a series.



The challenges I had with this shot were:
A relatively small room with white walls and white ceiling -I don't have a backdrop. I was combating light spilling everywhere when trying to create a low key shot.
Positioning the speed lights to capture a subject constantly moving, shifting, spinning (no assistant to stabilize her)
Finding a flattering pose and capturing a good angle.




Sep 08, 2016 at 12:48 AM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Critique: Off Camera Flash/aerial silks


Others:

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Sep 08, 2016 at 12:53 AM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Critique: Off Camera Flash/aerial silks


A fresh and different departure from the norm. Kudo's for the creative approach.


Sep 08, 2016 at 05:09 AM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Critique: Off Camera Flash/aerial silks


These are definite keepers. I wish you could see a little more of the facial area in #1. Thanks for sharing. Jim


Sep 08, 2016 at 05:16 AM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Critique: Off Camera Flash/aerial silks


The last is the definite strongest IMO! The first two don't have as much impact for me because her form is lost with the black on black and isn't accentuated by the lighting.

Nice shots!

Jeff



Sep 08, 2016 at 06:37 AM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Critique: Off Camera Flash/aerial silks


2, 4 and 5 are my favorites, great job here however, all are good.


Sep 08, 2016 at 08:41 AM
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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · Critique: Off Camera Flash/aerial silks


Thank you all for the feedback. I hardly ever shoot with off camera flash. I'm relieved there arn't huge errors that give away my inexperience.


Sep 08, 2016 at 04:43 PM





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