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Shasoc wrote:
Well seen, Steve. My preference would be to use a composition that enhances more the truck, being that the subject of your image. I also think that a landscape crop would fit better the shape of the truck. to me the inclusion of the building is a bit intrusive and distracting. I like the inclusion of the people sitting on the bench and of the sidewalk, since they give the sense of an urban environment. More like this, just another way to look at the composition of your fine image.
Socrate
Socrate, your take is very much appreciated. I thought the building was significant to reinforce that the scene was in an urban environment, but I like what you've done. Your crop is definitely tighter and more focused, and your pp well done. Thanks again for working this.
Steve
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