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Your comments and critiques always appreciated.

Steve




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Sep 02, 2016 at 09:30 PM
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I like the tree on the truck with the trees in the background. Another good catch.


Sep 02, 2016 at 09:42 PM
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Steve, I was expecting to see an apple store ... nice capture...


Sep 04, 2016 at 03:41 PM
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vilimo wrote:
Steve, I was expecting to see an apple store ... nice capture...

The real apples are on the bench😀😀😀

Steve



Sep 04, 2016 at 04:34 PM
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Nice shot, and the two bench sitters complete this image.


Sep 04, 2016 at 07:08 PM
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Fred Amico wrote:
Nice shot, and the two bench sitters complete this image.

Thanks so much fred for looking and commenting.
Steve



Sep 04, 2016 at 09:08 PM
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Well seen and timed!
Scott



Sep 05, 2016 at 01:22 AM
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p.1 #8 · p.1 #8 · Local Apples


Good eye!


Sep 05, 2016 at 05:02 AM
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To Scott, peacefrog, and naddyfi:
Your kind and generous comments much appreciated.
steve



Sep 05, 2016 at 11:35 AM
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Well seen, Steve. My preference would be to use a composition that enhances more the truck, being that the subject of your image. I also think that a landscape crop would fit better the shape of the truck. to me the inclusion of the building is a bit intrusive and distracting. I like the inclusion of the people sitting on the bench and of the sidewalk, since they give the sense of an urban environment. More like this, just another way to look at the composition of your fine image.
Socrate







Sep 05, 2016 at 03:07 PM
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Shasoc wrote:
Well seen, Steve. My preference would be to use a composition that enhances more the truck, being that the subject of your image. I also think that a landscape crop would fit better the shape of the truck. to me the inclusion of the building is a bit intrusive and distracting. I like the inclusion of the people sitting on the bench and of the sidewalk, since they give the sense of an urban environment. More like this, just another way to look at the composition of your fine image.
Socrate


Socrate, your take is very much appreciated. I thought the building was significant to reinforce that the scene was in an urban environment, but I like what you've done. Your crop is definitely tighter and more focused, and your pp well done. Thanks again for working this.

Steve



Sep 05, 2016 at 09:11 PM





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