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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Hat Trick


My favorite model. Now 3 years old.
Candids (but I called his attention to grab the shots)
Preferences, suggestions, nits, etc?

Thanks
Scott



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Aug 21, 2016 at 07:44 PM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Hat Trick


2nd is best, I like the smile and the less distracting background. What will he look like when he grows into that hat?


Aug 21, 2016 at 09:14 PM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Hat Trick




ben egbert wrote:
2nd is best, I like the smile and the less distracting background. What will he look like when he grows into that hat?


2nd photo for me also, for both the eye contact and expression. Handsome boy, changing quickly, who will someday appreciate all the portraits you've taken of him.

Steve



Aug 21, 2016 at 10:44 PM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Hat Trick


Thanks guys.
I agree on #2.
The technical issues were need for significant dodging of my grandson's face/chest to compensate for the lighting; and in #1 and 3 whether I kept his neck too dark. Additionally the neck looks super odd: a think stalk. Is it the angle? Lighting? Lens? or just the age.

Scott



Aug 25, 2016 at 08:36 PM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Hat Trick


As usual, I'd suggest a looser composition with more on the bottom as well to vertically de-center his eyes in the frame. (Applies to all three. As usual, I'm not suggesting changing the compo in post, but how it could be improved at capture.) To illustrate:







Sep 02, 2016 at 10:40 PM





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