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Steve Wylie wrote:
I think for a first effort, this is fine, with a couple of notable things to fix. First, the tall grass on the left side of the image has to go. You could crop this out without compromising the integrity of the image. Then, I'd clone out some of the distracting grass bits at the horizon near her (there are three or four of them there). Then, I'd get rid of the light green, tall piece of grass that is lightest in color and the piece just to the left of it. I'd go ahead and leave the rest, on the right side.
As to the distortion factor, your subject placement hasn't generated any noticeable distortion in my opinion. I think wide angle portraits are great, if the environment is important, as it is in this photo. Keep it up!...Show more →
Good points, Steve. Agree.
She needs to look up rather than down for this shot.
Lovely background. You are way beyond "camera owner".
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