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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Asbury Park Beach


Your comments and critiques always welcome.

Steve







Aug 07, 2016 at 05:44 PM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Asbury Park Beach


Has a classic old time beach picture look to it.


Aug 07, 2016 at 07:14 PM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Asbury Park Beach


ben egbert wrote:
Has a classic old time beach picture look to it.


A beautiful sunny afternoon, and then about 15 minutes after I took this the heavens opened up.

This is a jpg straight out of the camera. Usually I convert from RAW to black and white using Silver Efex Pro but as an experiment left this as out of the camera. Any thoughts? Too dark?

Steve



Aug 08, 2016 at 07:28 AM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Asbury Park Beach


Steve,

A bit dark/muddled to my eyes.

I'd look to adjust things something more similar to below:

Cheers!

Jeff







Aug 08, 2016 at 07:39 AM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Asbury Park Beach


beavens wrote:
Steve,

A bit dark/muddled to my eyes.

I'd look to adjust things something more similar to below:

Cheers!

Jeff


Thanks Jeff, and agree better. I'll have to play with the monotone settings on my camera.



Aug 08, 2016 at 08:01 AM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Asbury Park Beach


eeneryma wrote:
A beautiful sunny afternoon, and then about 15 minutes after I took this the heavens opened up.

This is a jpg straight out of the camera. Usually I convert from RAW to black and white using Silver Efex Pro but as an experiment left this as out of the camera. Any thoughts? Too dark?

Steve


Well you know I don't get B&W. As I said it looked like an old time photo which means aged and maybe the result of the way those older films captured a scene. Jeff fixed that aspect of it unless that is what you were going for.



Aug 08, 2016 at 08:47 AM
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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · Asbury Park Beach


Timeless scene and good choice for BW in my opinion. It needed some brightening as Jeff provided.
Scott



Aug 08, 2016 at 12:02 PM





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