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ben egbert wrote:
1. a nice pose, unique, one you don't often see. Notice the hole in the water he creates with meniscus. Very sharp and well processed. More eye contact would be nice but just a nit.
2. tough light and background here, you kept the exposure very well in spite of that. Good detail, lifting shadows a bit under the wing would help. The green pole and reeds are mildly distracting.
3. Very sharp and well exposed. Having the reeds not be in front of the bird would help of course but still pretty good. I like the eye contact and pose.
4. Very nice, all I can say to improve would be a better angle for the eyes.
5. Works fine at web size, probably a challenge at print size.
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Thank you for the comments, Ben! Only took about 25-30 shots to get him with the beak partially in the water. That sucker was quick! I have quite a few of him with his butt in the air and neck halfway in.
Sounds like mostly "almost, but not quite" in this lot.
Jeff
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