OlafSiebert Offline Upload & Sell: Off
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Jef, my critics are raw, but honest.
On 'home' you start talking in the third person ('Jef is', but later on you switch to first person ('mijn'). Don't mix this. Personally, since it is YOUR site, I think you should talk in the first person.
'Prijzen': basically, except weddings, all your sessions are 200 euro, so you can simplify your list. I would not offer a discount on my site. Futhermore, to see your prices, I need to click 4 times. Make it easy: a customer should only click once to see all your prices.
Natuur: get rid off it. No single couple cares about this. Nature should be your hobby, your passion. Portraits is your business. Don't mix this.
Blog: keep it strictly business. Facebook is for your private outings, the blog for portrait work.
hope this helps. olaf (yes, I do speak dutch).
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