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Your comments and critiques welcome.

Steve



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Jul 25, 2016 at 06:25 PM
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This is a neat shot Steve. I would have liked to see the full cab but I think the way you have it gives it a bit of a dynamic feel. The hard edged red dot seems out of place with all the other nicely oof bokeh and really pulls the eye. Of course that may be your intent as it makes a solid target nearly dead center.

It almost looks like a toy car doesn't it?

Dave



Jul 26, 2016 at 07:46 AM
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lighthound wrote:
This is a neat shot Steve. I would have liked to see the full cab but I think the way you have it gives it a bit of a dynamic feel. The hard edged red dot seems out of place with all the other nicely oof bokeh and really pulls the eye. Of course that may be your intent as it makes a solid target nearly dead center.

It almost looks like a toy car doesn't it?

Dave


Hi DAve and thanks for your comments. I've been betwixt and between on the red dot as it is so powerful, pulling the eye. My choices were to leave it as is, tone it down, or clone it out. Still under consideration.

Steve



Jul 26, 2016 at 08:13 AM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Taxi in Downpour


Ha! I got it right! It is Red.

Dave




Jul 26, 2016 at 08:24 AM
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I like the image but unless it is part of the message, I think the dot needs to go.
Alternatively, tone it down with some blur and change the color of one of the dots near the front of the cab to green!

Scott



Jul 26, 2016 at 08:52 AM
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sbeme wrote:
I like the image but unless it is part of the message, I think the dot needs to go.
Alternatively, tone it down with some blur and change the color of one of the dots near the front of the cab to green!

Scott


I love the red/green idea!!!, plus your other suggestions. You have an ingenius mind!!

Steve




Jul 26, 2016 at 09:00 AM
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eeneryma wrote:
I love the red/green idea!!!, plus your other suggestions. You have an ingenius mind!!

Steve



Here's a stab at Scott's suggestion.




Taxi Downpour 2




Jul 26, 2016 at 09:22 PM
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I think the added green helps, but would prefer it not "sticking" to the front of the can and being more like a bokeh ball of the red.

Is the sudden dropoff of focus in the lower-half due to a slanting windshield? That's throwing me off a bit.

I like the shot conceptually but not sure the execution entirely lines up.

My groggy coupla pennies!

Cheers!

Jeff



Jul 27, 2016 at 12:53 PM
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beavens wrote:
I think the added green helps, but would prefer it not "sticking" to the front of the can and being more like a bokeh ball of the red.

Is the sudden dropoff of focus in the lower-half due to a slanting windshield? That's throwing me off a bit.

I like the shot conceptually but not sure the execution entirely lines up.

My groggy coupla pennies!

Cheers!

Jeff


Thanks Jeff. I'll see if I can make the green bokeh separate from cab tonight.
Steve



Jul 27, 2016 at 01:25 PM
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eeneryma wrote:
Thanks Jeff. I'll see if I can make the green bokeh separate from cab tonight.
Steve


Another stab at a better green bokeh.



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Jul 27, 2016 at 09:21 PM
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p.1 #11 · p.1 #11 · Taxi in Downpour


Improvement IMO!

Jeff



Jul 28, 2016 at 10:36 AM
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p.1 #12 · p.1 #12 · Taxi in Downpour


The last one is really nice, Steve!!!

Victor



Jul 29, 2016 at 08:17 AM
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p.1 #13 · p.1 #13 · Taxi in Downpour


vilimo wrote:
The last one is really nice, Steve!!!

Victor


Thanks Villmo, and thanks to Scott for his invaluable input!



Jul 29, 2016 at 08:40 AM





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