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Hi Juan,
Welcome to FM Landscape! You captured an interesting subject and great colors. I am not trying to diminish your work, but here are a few thoughts that occurred to me that could help. You may of course take them or leave them.
1. The blurry branches on the right are a little distracting. Taking a second exposure at a faster shutter speed and blending the two shots together would allow for the water flow that you like with sharp foliage as well.
2. The water is clearly the focus of the image, but the flow of it leads the eye from the center to the left leaving the right side as an afterthought. Finding a slightly different vantage point would keep the eye moving through the whole frame.
3. A little more breathing room between the rock in the lower left corner and the edge of the frame would give a better sense of completion. Same thing with the cut off rocks along the left edge.
Tim
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