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+1 @ stitch work
+1 @ saturation
Looks like you may have some banding in the upper right corner (saturation induced )
Might consider cropping the ends to remove the "man-made" stuff @ sidewalk / path on the left, and the pier / dock on the right (sailboat stays) and reduce the width. I realize that when pano stitching, we can get caught up in more is better at look how wide I can go, but I'm not sure it helps to go quite that wide here.
If the pier or path are truly integral (imo, they aren't) to your message, then you certainly can include them, but having both of them in the scene tends to pull us A) harder to the edges (i.e. exiting the frame), and B) render a bit of the "ping-pong" effect.
In the end, I think it's a nice capture to convey a day communing with the natural area ... away from the city. It kinda says to me that, "Yes, you can escape the city."
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