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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Favorites from recent summer sessions (14 images)


Just have a few favorites from recent spring/summer sessions. Trying to cheery pick my favorites so that there are'nt so many images. hopefully 14 isn't too bad and thanks so much for looking.

1.

2016-06-07_0002 by Shawn Robertson, on Flickr

2.

2016-06-07_0005 by Shawn Robertson, on Flickr

3.

2016-06-17_0001 by Shawn Robertson, on Flickr

4.

2016-06-17_0004 by Shawn Robertson, on Flickr

5.

2016-06-17_0005 by Shawn Robertson, on Flickr

6.

2016-07-13_0007 by Shawn Robertson, on Flickr

7.

2016-07-13_0008 by Shawn Robertson, on Flickr

8. Was duplicate of #11 and removed

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2016-07-13_0006 by Shawn Robertson, on Flickr

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2016-07-13_0002 by Shawn Robertson, on Flickr

11.

2016-07-13_0004 by Shawn Robertson, on Flickr

12.

2016-07-13_0003 by Shawn Robertson, on Flickr

13.

2016-05-17_0020 by Shawn Robertson, on Flickr

14.

2016-07-13_0009 by Shawn Robertson, on Flickr



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Jul 13, 2016 at 10:32 AM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Favorites from recent summer sessions (14 images)


These are great Shawn! I really like them.

I'd like to make two modest suggestions. On #10, consider cropping out some of the grass. I think it will sustain the mood yet make the composition a little more dynamic.

On #13, there's a big brown sprig of grass dead center the pulls my eye away from the subject. Clone it out on another layer and then toggle that layer on and off and see which you think works better.



Jul 13, 2016 at 10:56 AM
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Shawn, fantastic set!

It seems more contrasty than what I'm used to from you. The first shot, even though the baby's not in great lighting (coming straight down) is completely magical! I love No. 8 as well.

I completely agree with Doug's two suggestions. Going even further, I'm going to suggest something else that I also struggle with. The 2x3 aspect ratio. Not every pic is meant to be kept at that ratio. If any direction, our first way to change is to to go 4x5 or even 1x1. But some of these would look cool, I think with a more cinematic ratio aspect, a really strong horizontal where you cut out more of the grass. I think the sky is much more interesting in 9, 11 and 13. In fact, with the boy kind of looking up in 9, I'd keep the 2x3 but shift the shot up so the grass is only at the bottom of the frame and the sky -- which to me is more interesting and conceptually (to me) represents their future -- is a major factor in the image.

Sorry about writing so much, esp since you didn't ask for c&c.

And 14 is totally rad! Great job!



Jul 13, 2016 at 11:05 AM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Favorites from recent summer sessions (14 images)


I like them.

#1 is a clean mirror composite. Good job.



Jul 13, 2016 at 11:26 AM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Favorites from recent summer sessions (14 images)


dmacmillan wrote:
These are great Shawn! I really like them.

I'd like to make two modest suggestions. On #10, consider cropping out some of the grass. I think it will sustain the mood yet make the composition a little more dynamic.

On #13, there's a big brown sprig of grass dead center the pulls my eye away from the subject. Clone it out on another layer and then toggle that layer on and off and see which you think works better.


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friscoron wrote:
Shawn, fantastic set!

It seems more contrasty than what I'm used to from you. The first shot, even though the baby's not in great lighting (coming straight down) is completely magical! I love No. 8 as well.

I completely agree with Doug's two suggestions. Going even further, I'm going to suggest something else that I also struggle with. The 2x3 aspect ratio. Not every pic is meant to be kept at that ratio. If any direction, our first way to change is to to go 4x5 or even 1x1. But some of these would look cool, I think with a more
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Thanks guys, really great suggestions, to the point of how did i miss that on some of them lol.

Ron always welcome critique, no matter ho much or how long it goes on. glad you took the time


01Ryan10 wrote:
I like them.

#1 is a clean mirror composite. Good job.


thank you, the side i mirrored wasn't even that bad but i was very OCD with it and wanted that clean composition.




Jul 13, 2016 at 11:42 AM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Favorites from recent summer sessions (14 images)


Very nice series, 4 and 5 are my favorites..!!

Marcelo



Jul 13, 2016 at 01:12 PM
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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · Favorites from recent summer sessions (14 images)


Love 1, 4, 5, and 8.


Jul 15, 2016 at 05:11 AM
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p.1 #8 · p.1 #8 · Favorites from recent summer sessions (14 images)


Damn these are all amazing.

Adam



Jul 15, 2016 at 10:21 AM
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p.1 #9 · p.1 #9 · Favorites from recent summer sessions (14 images)


Very nice.
#13 is my favorite especially with the balloons horizontal.



Jul 17, 2016 at 06:45 PM
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p.1 #10 · p.1 #10 · Favorites from recent summer sessions (14 images)


Lightsearcher wrote:
Very nice series, 4 and 5 are my favorites..!!

Marcelo


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Arka wrote:
Love 1, 4, 5, and 8.


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Adam_A wrote:
Damn these are all amazing.

Adam


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gschlact wrote:
Very nice.
#13 is my favorite especially with the balloons horizontal.




thanks a lot, sorry for the delay in reply.... been away unfortunately.


#13 and the other horizontal running image was just something fun I was trying with finding an area that had a hill and a nice empty sky and that way I could get low to the ground for a different perspective.



Jul 21, 2016 at 09:30 AM





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