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DaleBerlin
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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Watercolor


This is Western Lake, just west of Watercolor Florida. Thanks for looking.




Edited on Jul 21, 2016 at 08:24 PM · View previous versions



Jul 10, 2016 at 07:27 PM
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Hey Dale,

This has a nice mood with the mist. I would crop some off the bottom to lose those rocks though. They are in shadow, so you have minimized their impact, but they still end up distracting. Lose those, and maybe some off the top of the sky and this will really shine.

Jim



Jul 11, 2016 at 02:42 AM
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Thank you Jim, I can go either way with the rocks. They are just foreground detail that were part of the actual landscape. The S curve leading the eye into a foggy sunset is the important part. Hey Jim, I want to thank you for commenting on my last two posts. You were the only comments I got. I know its kind of your job, but if you really think the work is not up to FM standards, please don't feel like you should. No feedback is feedback. I'll keep trying


Jul 11, 2016 at 12:23 PM





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