No. 1 is all trees and the blur at the top...the girl is lost, what is your subject Maybe crop her closer.
No. 2 the out of focus flowers draws the eye away...distracting.
I think they are both great. I love "Environmental Portraits" like #1. I think #2 works well too. In #2, she looks perfectly in focus too me. I love the flowers wrapping around her. Great work in my opinion.