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Archive 2016 · Fiona. Summer Portrait.

  
 
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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Fiona. Summer Portrait.




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Jul 10, 2016 at 10:32 AM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Fiona. Summer Portrait.


Fiona seems lost among the trees and flowers



Jul 10, 2016 at 05:01 PM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Fiona. Summer Portrait.


I agree with CW100. Trees are so much the subject in #1 and the blurred flowers attract too much attention in #2.

I suggest making her much larger in the frame.



Jul 10, 2016 at 05:05 PM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Fiona. Summer Portrait.


No. 1 is all trees and the blur at the top...the girl is lost, what is your subject Maybe crop her closer.
No. 2 the out of focus flowers draws the eye away...distracting.



Jul 11, 2016 at 11:37 PM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Fiona. Summer Portrait.


I think they are both great. I love "Environmental Portraits" like #1. I think #2 works well too. In #2, she looks perfectly in focus too me. I love the flowers wrapping around her. Great work in my opinion.


Jul 12, 2016 at 01:14 AM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Fiona. Summer Portrait.


Thanks for the comments! Spot on Ryan.


Jul 15, 2016 at 06:39 AM





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