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Archive 2016 · Semi-candid portrait

  
 
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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Semi-candid portrait


https://c2.staticflickr.com/8/7345/27592124013_f7b97e1a03_b.jpg


85mm, f6.3, 1/400s, ISO 250


I know I cut the girl on the left; that was because I wanted to get the third one who was on the right in the frame which was unsuccessful. In my future photos I try not to do that. I personally like the colors. I don't really know how they turned up this way.

Edited on Jul 11, 2016 at 06:45 AM · View previous versions



Jul 10, 2016 at 10:11 AM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Semi-candid portrait


I am seeing a box saying the photo is no longer available


Jul 10, 2016 at 08:26 PM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Semi-candid portrait


Corrected it.


Jul 11, 2016 at 06:45 AM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Semi-candid portrait


Hi pixle!

The first things that jump out to me are that the crop is quite awkward on the girl on the right (amputated hand and also disappear into crotch) and that the overall look seems to be heavy on the contrast. I'm on a horrid work monitor, but the colors seems to be a little yellow tinted.

I put together a quick rework as food for thought, but perhaps the only part you should look at is the recrop.

Hope this helps a bit.

Cheers!

Jeff

.edit I don't think that the recrop really solves the awkwardness problem. Dang.







Jul 28, 2016 at 02:21 PM





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