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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Sunset at Harris Beach Marine Garden (+1)


Just north of Brookings, OR.
Hope you enjoy!
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Edited on Jul 08, 2016 at 08:04 PM · View previous versions



Jul 08, 2016 at 04:40 PM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Sunset at Harris Beach Marine Garden (+1)


Gorgeous image. The foreground is killer. While not a deal-breaker, it would be nice to have a hair more breathing room up top above that hill. I might be tempted to clone-in a thin slice of sky.


Jul 08, 2016 at 04:53 PM
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Dave Dillemuth wrote:
Gorgeous image. The foreground is killer. While not a deal-breaker, it would be nice to have a hair more breathing room up top above that hill. I might be tempted to clone-in a thin slice of sky.


Hmmm - I agree that more breathing room would help. Not sure how I could successfully clone more sky but I do have other captures that give the breathing room - which I added above.

Thanks for your helpful critique!

Dave



Jul 08, 2016 at 08:03 PM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Sunset at Harris Beach Marine Garden (+1)


Add a bit of canvas and use content aware. Worth trying.


Jul 08, 2016 at 08:09 PM
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Nice one Dave, #1 is the winner for the sun star and the more spot lit foreground. +1 add more sky. Love that part of the coast, lived in Gold Beach for a while.

Heron



Jul 08, 2016 at 10:57 PM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Sunset at Harris Beach Marine Garden (+1)


Dave Dillemuth wrote:
Add a bit of canvas and use content aware. Worth trying.


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OregonSun wrote:
Nice one Dave, #1 is the winner for the sun star and the more spot lit foreground. +1 add more sky. Love that part of the coast, lived in Gold Beach for a while.

Heron


Okay - I tried but the result is more sky and more hill. It does get the horizon down lower.
Dave







Jul 09, 2016 at 12:17 AM
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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · Sunset at Harris Beach Marine Garden (+1)


Seriously beautiful image Dave. I like your last edit. Wish the lower left corner was sharper, and I think the horizon may be tilted a tad, but wow, what a shot.


Jul 09, 2016 at 02:05 PM
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p.1 #8 · p.1 #8 · Sunset at Harris Beach Marine Garden (+1)


The highlights on the foreground vegetation is quite lovely. It's not going to help the breathing room but both the images can use some leveling of the horizon.


Jul 09, 2016 at 07:17 PM
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DaleBerlin wrote:
Seriously beautiful image Dave. I like your last edit. Wish the lower left corner was sharper, and I think the horizon may be tilted a tad, but wow, what a shot.


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Tuan Le wrote:
The highlights on the foreground vegetation is quite lovely. It's not going to help the breathing room but both the images can use some leveling of the horizon.


Thanks Dale/Tuan for the comments.

The horizon was a tricky one. The horizon on the left and the horizon between island and sea stack are not the same horizon - as the center horizon has both sea and a distant high bluff - so its top line has to be higher than the sea line to left. Also I bracketed for exposure but should have done a focus stack as well. Lesson learned. One other lesson learned was to use my zoom - as 28mm was too tight and did not allow for headroom and my 21mm was just too wide.

Maybe next year!

Dave



Jul 10, 2016 at 04:44 PM
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p.1 #10 · p.1 #10 · Sunset at Harris Beach Marine Garden (+1)


Dave,
Last edit works well for me. Very nice.



Jul 10, 2016 at 09:17 PM
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p.1 #11 · p.1 #11 · Sunset at Harris Beach Marine Garden (+1)


Sweet work Dave!



Jul 12, 2016 at 12:19 AM





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