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chiron wrote:
Hi Ben.
I really like the final re-work. In general, in some of your pictures that you are offering for critique, the foreground sometimes feels a bit disconnected from (flatter, less interesting, different tonalities) and more prosaic than the background.
In general, in your pictures that I like best and find beautiful, there often is minimal foreground and an emphasis on intense, variegated color and massive forms.
In this final re-work, the tonalities of the foreground feel more joined to the background and visually integrted with it than in the earlier versions.
Also, the foreground becomes one of three planes in the picture (the foreground plane, the background plane, and a plane created by the darker clouds coming forward in the sky). Having the three interacting planes makes the picture feel deeper and more unified and also more complex. The foreground is more balanced against the other elements....Show more →
Thanks for the very detailed analysis, it is very helpful. As a way of explanation, I am fond of the vegetation in these places and at 100% the detail is fun to see at print size, but does not come off so well at web sizes.
I wil pay attention to the idea of better integration.
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