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Archive 2016 · I see you.

  
 
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Jun 16, 2016 at 10:49 AM
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Very nice Ron, maybe just a little smoothing of the tones on her forehead.
Douglas



Jun 16, 2016 at 05:14 PM
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Thanks Douglas.


Jun 17, 2016 at 06:18 AM
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Very nice portrait of a lovely model.

My only nit is the balance of the flash with the ambient light. I think the flash is a bit too strong, and the ambient is a little weak.

Good job with the pose.

Thanks for sharing. Boomer Sooner!



Jun 17, 2016 at 10:38 AM
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Flash is strong, but I do like the photo. Was it off or on camera?


Jun 17, 2016 at 10:57 AM
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Thanks Brennan55, it was off camera about 10 or so feet away from her camera left. (Bare bulb with the reflector that comes with it only.) My next purchase is to get a beauty dish to go with this light.


Jun 17, 2016 at 11:20 AM
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A beautiful model well photographed. I like the composition and the play of her hand going up the tree is very good. So often I see the back of the hand photographed which can detract from the shot. I would just like to see some more separation of her from the tree and the background. Her hair looks great falling freely as it does but lacks some vibrance and blends into the dark background a bit. The tree comes off a bit strong to me and maybe could be darkened so her medium/light skin tones stand out a bit more--maybe darkening the edge or a slight vignette. There is something about this shot that has a 50's vibe for me. Very nice!


Jun 17, 2016 at 09:34 PM





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