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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Schooner Mary Day (link fixed)


Based out of Camden, Maine.
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Schooner Mary Day by Keith, on Flickr

Edited on Jun 12, 2016 at 06:48 PM · View previous versions
Jun 12, 2016 at 03:44 PM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Schooner Mary Day (link fixed)


Nice one, Keith!

I'd clone out that branch in the water. Do you have any more room on the right? Feels a lil bit cramped.

Quick food for thought rework below.

Cheers!

Jeff
Jun 12, 2016 at 03:55 PM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Schooner Mary Day (link fixed)


Thanks, Jeff. I have room on the right in the original. Didn't notice the branch! [that's what Photo Critique is for - ]

keith
Jun 12, 2016 at 03:59 PM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Schooner Mary Day (link fixed)


Can't see the original, but the rework is very nice. I have only seen the double line flare on my 11-24 lens at f22, What lens?
Jun 12, 2016 at 04:19 PM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Schooner Mary Day (link fixed)


Very nice palette. I like the lens flare which is positioned well. Calming scene. REwork improves, IMO.
I love Camden!
Scott
Jun 12, 2016 at 05:12 PM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Schooner Mary Day (link fixed)


Beautiful shot Keith! +1 on Jeff's edit. Other than that I got nothin.

Well done!

Dave
Jun 12, 2016 at 06:35 PM
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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · Schooner Mary Day (link fixed)


ben, I think it's the 24-70 /2.8 II, i'm sure it isn't the 11-24.

Thanks,
kk
Jun 12, 2016 at 06:50 PM
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p.1 #8 · p.1 #8 · Schooner Mary Day (link fixed)


Thanks, Scott and Dave.
kk
Jun 12, 2016 at 06:51 PM





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