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May 31, 2016 at 11:25 AM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Lily


That's a pretty lily, but I find the background a little distracting.

A more simplistic rework below as food for thought.

Technically I could use a bit more DOF and I like the comp.

Cheers!

Jeff







May 31, 2016 at 09:47 PM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Lily


Eric,
Not sure why you haven't had more feedback. It's a beautiful image. In your original post it feels a bit like it is on a stage with some form of curtains/background on the left. I prefer the rework Jeff provided. Matter of taste.

Scott



Jun 02, 2016 at 06:49 PM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Lily


Fantastic!


Jun 02, 2016 at 08:55 PM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Lily


+1 @ others.


Jun 02, 2016 at 09:23 PM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Lily


Thanks everyone.

I like Jeff's rework - in fact, I toyed with the background before posting. But I kept returning to the original version. I like how the dark diagonal (stair railing) repeated the curve of the flower.



Jun 03, 2016 at 01:36 PM





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