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RyanDillender
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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Kalalau Valley


A few photos from Kalalau Valley. I appreciate you taking a look and welcome your comments and critiques.

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#2


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May 24, 2016 at 12:58 PM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Kalalau Valley


Some are tired of sunstars but I'm not. I think all of these might benefit from more contrast. Some D&B might is worth a try to highlight the wave action. I like the 16x9 crop on the last 2 but that is personnel taste. Well done.


May 24, 2016 at 04:21 PM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Kalalau Valley


Hey Ryan,

I like #2 here quite a bit. Some very nice lighting, and the color of the clouds looks cool. I like what you were going for in #3, but the sun being on the left with that sunstar seems to be creating an unbalance in the scene compared to #2.

Jim



May 25, 2016 at 12:04 PM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Kalalau Valley


Thank you both. I think I might like the idea of cropping #2.


May 27, 2016 at 02:01 PM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Kalalau Valley


# 2 for me as well. Agree on the need some contrast adjustments.


May 27, 2016 at 04:46 PM





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