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Archive 2016 · Zoe

  
 
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It was a very bright day at the park, the shadow of the tree on her face to avoid overexpose the subject and the branches created a nice background.

Any feedback is very appreciated.

Marcelo

http://marcelobarrera.zenfolio.com/img/s5/v118/p2108350945-5.jpg




Apr 21, 2016 at 05:36 PM
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Great colors especially the colors of her eyes and hair. Amazing to me that they are so clear in the midst of such a colorful background. I guess the blur helps and the hue is just different enough. I might like to see her centered with the shadows radiating from her. Kind of against the rules but she is barely off center as it is. She is probably as pale as you present her here, but I might consider lowering the brightness of her skin tones just a tad. Despite my suggestions, I think your image is quite good.


Apr 21, 2016 at 09:36 PM
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Brev00 wrote:
Great colors especially the colors of her eyes and hair. Amazing to me that they are so clear in the midst of such a colorful background. I guess the blur helps and the hue is just different enough. I might like to see her centered with the shadows radiating from her. Kind of against the rules but she is barely off center as it is. She is probably as pale as you present her here, but I might consider lowering the brightness of her skin tones just a tad. Despite my suggestions, I think your image is quite good.


Thank you sod much for the feedback and suggestions, I'll try to lower the brightness on her skin tone.

Marcelo



Apr 24, 2016 at 09:06 PM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Zoe


The shadows of the branches are Ok. But in my view it is the close match of the color of the background to her complexion and hair that really sets this shot apart.

My one nit to pick is that I wish the sweater was not so blurred. Oh well.

Kelly



Apr 24, 2016 at 11:17 PM





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