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Ian Boys
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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · 2 more from the woods


645Z // 75mm






Apr 21, 2016 at 04:03 AM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · 2 more from the woods



Really like the first one, an interesting choice on the crop to do it so tightly.

Second one, I like just as well. But I'm curious why you chose to allow space on the left beyond the tree trunk.



Apr 21, 2016 at 07:43 AM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · 2 more from the woods


Hmm, good question. I like it as a square crop too (as you seem to suggest) but it feels more as though she is in a space rather than up against a wall if you can see both sides of the tree. I'm sure both would work. Maybe square is actually better.

Re the first one, I've always loved the 2.35:1 ratio of cinema. Of course I kept the 4:3 version as well.



Apr 21, 2016 at 09:43 AM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · 2 more from the woods


No, not necessarily suggesting a square, tho I'd probably go with that over the current (that's just me). If the original shot had more space on the right, I would simply shift the crop over so the far left is the outside edge of the tree trunk.

As for your cinematic ratio on the first, totally digging it.



Apr 21, 2016 at 09:49 AM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · 2 more from the woods


I've got about 8-9 shots of her here so there are all kinds of permutations but that second shot is completely uncropped.


Apr 21, 2016 at 10:10 AM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · 2 more from the woods


This is an attractive young lady. The photo's that you've posted of her have the same facial expression. It would be nice to see some variety.


Apr 21, 2016 at 11:40 AM
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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · 2 more from the woods


beautiful model and I love #1 on how it shows off those waves of hair but the crop doesnt work for me.

Both pictures feel a tad cool on WB but it might just be my monitor.



Apr 21, 2016 at 11:52 AM
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p.1 #8 · p.1 #8 · 2 more from the woods


BigIronCruiser wrote:
This is an attractive young lady. The photo's that you've posted of her have the same facial expression. It would be nice to see some variety.


Is this better?




Apr 21, 2016 at 02:49 PM
Ian Boys
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p.1 #9 · p.1 #9 · 2 more from the woods


Vcook wrote:
Both pictures feel a tad cool on WB but it might just be my monitor.


Yes the colour grading is deliberate. I take a lot of time over it and try several different versions before settling.



Apr 21, 2016 at 02:50 PM
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p.1 #10 · p.1 #10 · 2 more from the woods


Fantastic work, love the muted colors and the "weird" crop on the 1st shot.

Thank you for posting.

Marcelo



Apr 21, 2016 at 05:32 PM
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p.1 #11 · p.1 #11 · 2 more from the woods


Ian Boys wrote:
Is this better?

http://d2bfgqadt6qjww.cloudfront.net/i/p/538/53803-a1461268113300.jpg


They're all very nice, so there was no intention to imply that anything needed to be "better". The pose in this photo is certainly different, and she looks like she's freezing. Her basic facial expression, however, is very similar to the others.

That 645Z, btw, seems like an awesome camera.



Apr 22, 2016 at 12:22 AM
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p.1 #12 · p.1 #12 · 2 more from the woods


she was pretty cold

yes, the 645Z is amazing but I struggle holding it still enough



Apr 22, 2016 at 06:37 AM
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p.1 #13 · p.1 #13 · 2 more from the woods


Wow, I really like #1.



Apr 26, 2016 at 07:03 PM
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p.1 #14 · p.1 #14 · 2 more from the woods


Without adhering to any particular aspect ratio for aspect ratio's sake, what if you re-cropped #1 for the sake of what is in the photo, or rather, what could be excluded from it?




Apr 28, 2016 at 03:30 PM





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