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Really nice images ! Beautiful model, beautiful location, nice wardrobe and hair. Congratulations getting the new lens.
I like both images as is.
However, I'm not sure the composition is the best. I wonder if image 1 could be improved if it were cropped to a portrait orientation. The mountains in the background are nice, but I don't think the trees contribute that much.
I like image 2, but I think the model needs to be larger in the image. Again, I think the trees are competing too much for attention, and taking away from the model. I would try cropping this image as well. I would remove most of the blurred foreground branches on the RHS.
I think you have a nice location, but I would try to find a meadow or open area, where the mountains are visible, and trees show behind the model, but are not competing for attention.
Thanks for sharing your images.
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