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sbeme wrote:
I like the pose, the lighting, the expression (the lens..). I think you could crop a tad off the top, leaving pretty much the same format.
Skin tones are hard for me. Looks like pretty warm light but I can't tell if any adjustment is needed for "accuracy" besides keeping the warm look. BG shadows, color and softness all work well.
Scott
Thanks Scott - some could probably come off the top, but man I love his hair! Very warm light - probably about 45 minutes or so before sunset.
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RustyBug wrote:
I think the color shows the time of day very nicely ... which coordinates with his specular catchlights and the long shadow.
I might look to crop up from the bottom just a tad (just below the elbow crease) as the angles formed make an arrow pointing downward a bit. Square that off a touch and it become more of a horizontal "stop" line rather than a "go" out of the frame leader. The action is up, not down so I might look to mitigate that a touch ... but, not critical by any means.
Spot on with the time of day, Kent, as always! Thanks for the cropping tips. I agree that the action is up, but a distraction is a distraction!
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ben egbert wrote:
Great job, I can't suggest anything here.
Thanks Ben - it's not terribly difficult when the subjects are so great.
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WalterF wrote:
No nits from me, Good Job.
Walt
Cheers Walt!
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