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Your suggestions and critiques appreciated.

Steve



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Mar 18, 2016 at 10:09 AM
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Nice catch. I like the colorful skateboard and it is well framed here.


Mar 18, 2016 at 10:15 AM
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Thanks Ben! Are you outdoors yet or is it still too cold to go exploring?

Steve



Mar 18, 2016 at 10:20 AM
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eeneryma wrote:
Thanks Ben! Are you outdoors yet or is it still too cold to go exploring?

Steve


I am not planning a photo trip now until April 17. I was pretty sick for a couple weeks and missed the chance to go to Moab this month. The weather is fine, but the good roads are still closed and will be until late may.



Mar 18, 2016 at 11:05 AM
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I like this as well...I personally find the brown leg a distraction......Oh my...My first critique on someone elses photo.....


Mar 18, 2016 at 11:11 AM
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+1 @ Ben!

Well framed and a lot of pop. I'd check the highlights on the left left/shoe and perhaps burn down the dude in the upper-left.

Tweaked levels, a little burning and USM as a little food-for-thought rework.

Airport?

Cheers!

Jeff







Mar 18, 2016 at 11:16 AM
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Agreed about the left shoe needing a highlight adjustment. I was thinking that the leg in the upper left created an interesting triangulation with the skate boarder's legs rather than "minimizing" it as a distraction?

No as to an airport. I was at a business convention this week in Las Vegas and this young gentleman was standing in the aisle oblivious to my camera.

Steve



Mar 18, 2016 at 11:46 AM
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eeneryma wrote:
Agreed about the left shoe needing a highlight adjustment. I was thinking that the leg in the upper left created an interesting triangulation with the skate boarder's legs rather than "minimizing" it as a distraction?


Actually I prefer to keep it in now that you mention it - I like the line it creates. Possibly minimize a bit but still retain the mass?



Mar 18, 2016 at 01:19 PM
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Very nice.
Oddly, I like the original with the "extra leg" more noticeable on the left. Seems to say something more about modes of transport.

Scott



Mar 18, 2016 at 06:31 PM
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sbeme wrote:
Very nice.
Oddly, I like the original with the "extra leg" more noticeable on the left. Seems to say something more about modes of transport.

Scott

Thanks Scott. That was my thought also about the metaphor of legs being transportation, and in this case the method of propulsion. It's also a portrait aspect emphasizing vertically which the legs mirror. Always appreciate your take.

Steve



Mar 18, 2016 at 07:30 PM





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