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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Cat Sitting


Out and about on the street yesterday and couldn't resist this beautiful tabby. Critiques and suggestions appreciated.

Steve



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Feb 21, 2016 at 05:28 PM
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That piece of designed cement is sort of distracting, I am thinking a tighter crop. I am wanting to keep the left window edge so maybe you have to include some of the border of that feature to avoid a "too" landscape aspect ratio. Of if you have more at room at the top?


Feb 21, 2016 at 05:49 PM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Cat Sitting


+1 @ Ben - the interestingly bold pattern is an eyecatcher and unfortunate distraction.

I would also like the cat featured more - really pretty one here.

Tighten that crop up and then use the leftovers for a patterned abstract!

Cheers,

Jeff



Feb 21, 2016 at 07:32 PM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Cat Sitting


I like the mood, subject and shapes. Maybe some distortion correction, a bit of a crop and perhaps a black and white rendition?







Feb 21, 2016 at 08:12 PM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Cat Sitting


Thanks to all for your feedback and suggestions. I like Karen's crop and B&W.

Initially I liked the geometry of the composition, somewhat mondrianesque. But now I think Ben and Jeff are correct about the bottom left grid vying for attention and ultimately being distracting.

Steve



Feb 21, 2016 at 08:27 PM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Cat Sitting


going BW, as Karen did, simplifies the image again

Scott



Feb 23, 2016 at 08:26 PM





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