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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Two Landscapes from the Big Island, Hawaii | |
I was hoping you would post a few from your trip! Hope you had a great time!
First image is very nice. I like your composition where by you used the silhouetted shore line for the leading line. My only nit is that it feels a bit too strong in the red saturation and doesn't look real. A simple pull back on that channel's saturation and I think you have a winner here, cliche or not.
Second image I have to agree with Jeff on. It feels a little flat or washed out and is lacking depth. You have some fantastic elements in this shot and again, I like your composition as well. Viewing it at this tiny web size is not helping this image I suspect. Full screen sized you may not have the flatness issue.
Dave
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